Editing Novels Faster Episode 0: How to Use AI as an Extra Brain (and Should You?)

The Real Cost of Finishing a Novel – Edits and Revision

There is a moment every novelist recognizes: typing “The End” and realizing, almost immediately, that the work is not even close to finished. The draft exists, but the book does not yet. What follows is not a matter of polishing sentences or correcting typos, the so-called “line editing” that most people think of when discussing editing. It is the longer, quieter phase where the manuscript is tested for coherence, balance, and intent.

For long novels especially, revision becomes more expensive than drafting. Writing a first draft is additive, a slow stacking of words and scenes and chapters. Revision is comparative, with no clear pathway to follow. You are no longer creating something from nothing; you are holding dozens of decisions in mind at once, evaluating what stays, what moves, and what no longer earns its place and finding some system that allows you some measure of prioritization. That work compounds quickly, and it does so in ways that are difficult to measure until you are already deep inside it and flailing.

This is the problem I ran into for my first novel, and I want to streamline the process for my 2nd.

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From Fairy Tales to Facsimiles: Fizzling Disney Magic

Why Live-Action Remakes Feel Fake and Hollow

I. Introduction – The Experiment That Broke Disney’s Spell

Disney’s live-action remakes of original animation began as an intriguing question posed in the language of modern filmmaking. What might it look like to re-stage an animated classic using today’s cinematic tools: digital effects, live-action framing, modern sound? The 2015 Cinderella answered with a polite flourish. It kept the bones of the original but dressed them in new fabric, nodding toward elegance and restraint. It felt like a thoughtful curiosity, charming in its own way, like a balloon released gently into the air.

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“A Real Pain” and the Burden of Survival

Jesse Eisenberg’s directorial debut walks us through memory, grief, and the unresolved distance between family members

Late in A Real Pain, the film offers the hallmarks of an emotional climax. The childhood home of a Holocaust survivor, rediscovered by her two American grandsons. The camera lingers, the characters pause, a symbolic gesture is made. And then—nothing. No cathartis. No monologue. Just a stretch of quiet that first feels unresolved, until you realize it isn’t. The silence is the answer.

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How to Edit Your Manuscript: a Case Study with “Viral Agents”

This year, I’ve spent most of my writing time editing the manuscript for Viral Agents. In this post today, I’ll walk you through my editing process, making note of the rationale behind each step of the approach. This is still a work in progress, of course, so I will refrain from spoiling anything in the story. Plus, since the novel isn’t actually published yet, I can’t say that this approach has been successful from the perspective of actually producing a work fit and capable for public consumption. But, the process is underway, and I stand by it for now. Let’s get going.

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Plot and Theme’s Top Ten Films of 2022

People love lists, and none more than ones subjectively ranking assorted items (preferably related somehow). It is in that spirit that I have compiled my Top Ten Films released in 2022, especially now that I have seen some of the prestige films released near the end of the year. There are still quite a few … Read more

“Babylon”: Damien Chazelle’s Hollow Ode to Hollywood

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I’m not sure if you’re aware of this, but Damien Chazelle likes movies. Babylon, the director’s latest celebration of his own art form, is a monument to the indulgence of early Hollywood, documenting the seamy culture while celebrating the magical products that it produces. The result is an uneven and haphazard slog of over three … Read more

“The Whale” Devastates with a Timeless Look at Choice, Forgiveness, and Love

The Whale fucking destroyed me. With about fifteen minutes to go, I felt the lump forming in my throat. After a tiny plot twist, things started getting blurry. During the climactic scene, the tears started flowing freely, and by the time the credits rolled, I was an absolute mess. I wasn’t the only one, as … Read more

The Knives Out and Glass Onion Double-Feature Film Review

The “whodunit” style of mystery story has experienced a renaissance over the recent years with updated versions of the classic Agatha Christie stories like Murder on the Orient Express and Death on the Nile having reasonable success with audiences. More thriller-style mysteries like Gone Girl and Where the Crawdads Sing have been adapted from popular … Read more

Avatar 2: The Way-off Water

Avatar 2: The Way of Water is a three-hour Disney ride more than an actual film, and it feels as though the creators believe that’s plenty. Characters are drawn broadly and their motivations even more so. Plot elements are convenient, shoe-horned, and repetitious retreads of the first film, at least when they aren’t completely nonsensical. Themes are unchanged from the original, an afterthought at best. This is a movie that is more about the experience of watching it than the actual content of the movie.

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State of the Blog – March 2020

March is underway, and it is time for a quick update here at Plot and Theme. As usual, February is a pretty slow movie month, so there wasn’t a lot that I saw, but hopefully that will be balanced with the plethora of interesting movies set to debut in March.